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heartkilla2 Advanced
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 1:13 pm Post subject: |
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AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME please write more as soon as possible _________________
Know for which side you fight, or thou may be blinded by power rather then justice, greed rather then goodness. |
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LordRex Advanced

Joined: 17 Oct 2005 Posts: 1814 Location: In Equestria
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 10:35 pm Post subject: |
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Work Still In Progress!!! Chapter Content Can Change At The Next Revision!!
Part 8
Or blackness…it would seem. There was nothing there to indicate what monstrosity had scraped and banged at the door. Nothing but the opaque shadow of the corridor. As Nisha breathed a sigh of almost-relief, LR’s eyes narrowed in confusion…hadn’t the corridor been lit up? Acting on a sudden and instinctual burst of self-preservation, he quickly fell back behind an overturned table. Slightly questioning their leader’s stability, his crew followed him, hiding behind the table. He grimaced as he came face to face with a faceless skull, but he kept his eyes sharp and his finger on the trigger.
And then, he saw it, coming out of the shadows.
The head was almost human-like, if you could overlook the gaping, shark-like mouth filled with more teeth than could possibly fit in there. The teeth were sharp daggers – they looked poised to kill. The crown of the head was adorned with eight blood red spikes. As he looked closer, he saw that the spikes were actually white…but were covered with slowly congealing blood. Monica saw two eyes with what seemed to be a blood-red nostril between them. She was about to whisper a comment on that oddity, when the “nostril” constricted slightly. Wei’s grip tightened on the Pulse Cannon as he saw this. He had noticed the seamless way that the eyes connected with the “nostril” and had realised that it was actually a third eye. He could see no visible ears, but maybe this creature – whatever it was – didn’t need them. The head was attached to a powerfully muscled neck, literally laced with veins of every possible description. All of them were pulsing with an irregular – but hypnotising – rhythm.
The eyes constricted rapidly and the head jerked back with a speed that reminded Lidija of snakes. The skin of the creature was flesh-toned, but was liberally splattered with green streaks. The creature seemed to have a short internal debate with itself before stepping forward through the door…well, as much as it could anyway.
The neck was attached to a broad set of shoulders – almost gorilla-like, but all similarities ended there. Four wickedly sharp spines, two on each shoulder, jutted out from the flesh, glistening with the same mix of blood, oil and pus. No matter how horrific its head and shoulders were, the rest of it was...nightmarish. like the rest of it, its arms were densely packed with muscle – but were in various stages of mutation. The right arm and hand were semi-normal... _________________ Now Watching: KR: Wizard, Kuuga and Faiz. SS: Kyoryuger, Dairanger and Jetman. Other: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic |
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EVILG4 Intermediate

Joined: 27 Feb 2007 Posts: 340 Location: some where in your army, watching you waiting to kill
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 6:12 pm Post subject: |
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yay another awesome thingy chapter thing _________________
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orthy Simple
Joined: 28 Feb 2007 Posts: 80
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Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 7:09 pm Post subject: |
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good story keep them coming
i really like it lr
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Kamron3 Intermediate
Joined: 10 Mar 2007 Posts: 104
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Aura_of_Darkness Advanced

Joined: 10 Mar 2007 Posts: 907
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 12:15 am Post subject: |
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This story's cool. Keep up the work! |
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orthy Simple
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Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 9:06 pm Post subject: |
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sweet man keep them up |
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LordRex Advanced

Joined: 17 Oct 2005 Posts: 1814 Location: In Equestria
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2007 11:07 pm Post subject: |
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After much though, I am stopping work on Battlefield Konu. This has not been an easy decision to make, but it was influenced due to numerous other factors including assignments, sickness and real life work.
Hopefully, I'll pick this up later in the year. I thank those who have read, those who reviewed and those who just gave the title a cursory glance.
LR _________________ Now Watching: KR: Wizard, Kuuga and Faiz. SS: Kyoryuger, Dairanger and Jetman. Other: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic |
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TinyWarz Simple
Joined: 24 May 2007 Posts: 88
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 4:58 am Post subject: |
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hey ... i thought of a good idea. Maybe we can take all the stories and combine them and maybe send off to a editor or a printing house.whadda you all think? _________________ For what we all fight for, we will go to the same place where that is death. Or TinyWarz if you so wish. |
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LordRex Advanced

Joined: 17 Oct 2005 Posts: 1814 Location: In Equestria
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Posted: Sat Oct 13, 2007 2:26 am Post subject: |
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Do your eyes deceive you? No! Battlefield: Konu is back with a vengeance! Expect updates for this and TinyWarz Rangers to come slowly over time. Book One is going to end very shortly...and then Book 2 will pick up the pace!!
Part 8
Or blackness…it would seem. There was nothing there to indicate what monstrosity had scraped and banged at the door. Nothing but the opaque shadow of the corridor. As Nisha breathed a sigh of almost-relief, LR’s eyes narrowed in confusion…hadn’t the corridor been lit up? Acting on a sudden and instinctual burst of self-preservation, he quickly fell back behind an overturned table. Slightly questioning their leader’s stability, his crew followed him, hiding behind the table. He grimaced as he came face to face with a faceless skull, but he kept his eyes sharp and his finger on the trigger.
And then, he saw it, coming out of the shadows.
The head was almost human-like, if you could overlook the gaping, shark-like mouth filled with more teeth than could possibly fit in there. The teeth were sharp daggers – they looked poised to kill. The crown of the head was adorned with eight blood red spikes. As he looked closer, he saw that the spikes were actually white…but were covered with slowly congealing blood. Monica saw two eyes with what seemed to be a blood-red nostril between them. She was about to whisper a comment on that oddity, when the “nostril” constricted slightly. Wei’s grip tightened on the Pulse Cannon as he saw this. He had noticed the seamless way that the eyes connected with the “nostril” and had realised that it was actually a third eye. He could see no visible ears, but maybe this creature – whatever it was – didn’t need them. The head was attached to a powerfully muscled neck, literally laced with veins of every possible description. All of them were pulsing with an irregular – but hypnotising – rhythm.
The eyes constricted rapidly and the head jerked back with a speed that reminded Lidija of snakes. The skin of the creature was flesh-toned, but was liberally splattered with green streaks. The creature seemed to have a short internal debate with itself before stepping forward through the door…well, as much as it could anyway.
The neck was attached to a broad set of shoulders – almost gorilla-like, but all similarities ended there. Four wickedly sharp spines, two on each shoulder, jutted out from the flesh, glistening with the same mix of blood, oil and pus. No matter how horrific its head and shoulders were, the rest of it was...nightmarish. Like the rest of it, its arms were densely packed with muscle – but were in various stages of mutation. The right arm and hand were semi-normal – with recognisable fingers, joints and nails – but the skin was an odd shade of grey. To Wei’s eyes, the arm looked dead – it just hung at its side limply. Of course, it would twitch every now and then – but it looked like dead weight. The left arm though, was more alien than he’d care to admit. It didn’t even resemble a humanoid arm much – but there were still signs to show what it had been. From the elbow down, the skin had been peeled back – exposing blue and pink muscles underneath. He could see the muscles slide over the bones as the thing attempted to move through the opening. There wasn’t even a recognisable hand on the end of the wrist – it was just something that looked like…ooze. Whatever it was…it was pulsing and bubbling rapidly.
Weihan didn’t want to see the rest of the creature – he had seen enough. Silently, he lifted up the Pulse Cannon and stared down the barrel – aiming it at the creature’s head. He took in a deep breath…
Just as the creature swung its head towards him.
TBC…? _________________ Now Watching: KR: Wizard, Kuuga and Faiz. SS: Kyoryuger, Dairanger and Jetman. Other: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic |
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Aura_of_Darkness Advanced

Joined: 10 Mar 2007 Posts: 907
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Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2007 2:47 am Post subject: |
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YAY! MOAR!
Nice continuation, but, what's the species of the thing? _________________ Epicness:
GenStryker ingame
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TinyWarz Simple
Joined: 24 May 2007 Posts: 88
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Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2007 5:26 am Post subject: |
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hey maybe a cross between the Sha' Khar and human? _________________ For what we all fight for, we will go to the same place where that is death. Or TinyWarz if you so wish. |
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LegendaryPancake Simple
Joined: 16 Apr 2008 Posts: 5
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Posted: Thu May 01, 2008 7:54 pm Post subject: |
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I realize this is some serious bump, but are you gunna make a book 2? |
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LordRex Advanced

Joined: 17 Oct 2005 Posts: 1814 Location: In Equestria
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Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 6:23 pm Post subject: |
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I have plans for Books 2 - 4 written down, but this muse has been sleeping lately - so i need to kick it in the rear again _________________ Now Watching: KR: Wizard, Kuuga and Faiz. SS: Kyoryuger, Dairanger and Jetman. Other: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic |
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LegendaryPancake Simple
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Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 7:58 pm Post subject: |
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Damn right you do. |
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