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Battlefield: Konu - Book 1: Discovery
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RazorBladez
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 7:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked .............its either too good or i am too tired...pick one
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 8:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

that was uber awesome Cool
cant wait till next part comes
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 9:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OK...any more reviews?
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 3:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

no you lucked out dude noone like it i hated it i feel like pucking up my insides and shoving them up ass and then eating them

anyway now that i have stopped being stupid (srry i though rune was around) still good, too good for words thats why noones reviewing
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 11:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

God... i'm so damn scared... *faints*
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... Much better than nukes, that's too North Korean IMHO.
If these nukes are north korean, implement them anyway. They wont get 3 squares before tripping on a rock and turning into salvage.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 29, 2006 4:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Work In Progress!!

Part 7 –

Looking back, LR couldn’t say what he felt first. Horror, shock or excruciating pain as he slammed his right fist into the wall. Probably the pain first, since it shocked him to re-assess the situation from a fresh perspective. Frizz – their only voice to the “outside world” – had gone or been swept away by the rolling radio frequencies. A known madman – xLucidx was on Konu. Somewhere, he was lurking with whatever sick and twisted thoughts he had. Shaking his hand to take the sting away, LR rounded on the only person who knew about the inner workings of Project Lucid – Bettina Mawo.

“What do you know of xLucidx? Does he have any people he trusts and talks to? I don’t intend to come off as confronting – we need to know his inner thoughts and how deep he’s rooted into the system.”

Bettina chewed on her lower lip thoughtfully. She had already said her piece, but knew she had to say more. Anything to help the squad succeed. She racked her brain trying to find information and spoke.

“I know of one person he spent most of his time with. Well, not so much a person as cyborg. And, you know – there’s only one cyborg in all of the TWPRC.”

He knew who it was the moment the last syllable left her mouth. The Trans-warp Planet Rescue Corps only had one cyborg that no-one really knew about – or trusted. It’s serial number was C8BL3 – or Cabal for short.

The only reason no-one trusted it was because of it’s faulty AI chip, coupled with it’s permanently snarky personality. Of course, the AI chip couldn’t be blamed – it was a Microsoft product after all. Crappy AI chip aside, Cabal always sent shivers down everyone’s spines.

If xLucidx was talking to Cabal, that could only mean that the psycho had downloaded his plans into the android’s memory. As if reading his mind, Bettina shook her head.

“No, xLucidx wouldn’t do something so obvious as to download his research into Cabal’s memory. I…I know – knew him. He would have had at least twelve gigabytes of data. Cabal’s memory is only ten.”

Outside, the sun began to sink slowly – the planet was reaching its horizon. Monica sucked her lower lip and sighed. She had harboured a secret crush on LR for more than a year, but didn’t want to say anything…yet.

Her mind was going into overdrive as she desperately tried to grasp that one elusive name that plagued her memory. She blinked hard and spoke.

“We need to take a record of whatever’s here. Whatever we can take onto a meka, we take…whatever’s not bolted down. Ammo, food crates, strux – we’re taking it. We can’t afford to waste anymore time here.”


TBC...

WATCH THIS SPACE FOR MORE!!
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 29, 2006 9:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Woo thx LordRex!

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 01, 2006 1:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Cab, i think by, "special surprise" he ment that je was going to kick your butt... Rolling Eyes
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If these nukes are north korean, implement them anyway. They wont get 3 squares before tripping on a rock and turning into salvage.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 4:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

JESUS! CABAL IS THE ONLY CYBORG IN THE STORY!
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 5:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

yawn the story bored me but kinda exciting
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 10:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Safaria please stop saying BORING on every post you see. If you don't like it then don't read it.
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 7:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

is this story real good to having lot of sentances or am i bored to read it
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 4:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Safaria wrote:
is this story real good to having lot of sentances or am i bored to read it


Well, if you're reading it and replying - it's obviously not boring to you - otherwise you wouldn't have said anything in the first place
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 1:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 8:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

2 things.

1st thing is that this is the best i have ever read.


2nd is can you brimg me in this story and make me the last guy of a famous scout group that came 2 months before he came to this base and be in Bobcat missile tank. Also let me survive all the way to the end. It will help to attack xLucidx base.
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