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PostPosted: Sun Dec 18, 2011 6:17 am    Post subject: The Shak Kahr Chronicles Reply with quote

okay im starting a fanfic series called THE SHAK KAHR CHRONICLES

it involves the UF (united factions) trying to regain ground against the mysterious shak kahr forces

not to mention the many soilders on the front line who might not make it another day

the bandits are hoping to take over as the UF and SK face off

and the network in its secret alcoves beyond the galaxy prepares.................
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 18, 2011 6:45 am    Post subject: Episode 1, The awakening Reply with quote

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Sergeant John Ryan Ambo of the PGF shadow ops brigade sets down his Shadow Assassin MEchanised Kombat Assault unit or M.E.K.A. onto the Plains of Hadeas. Leaving civilized life behind for the year for his tour of duty in battle. This time his objective is to sabotage a Elite Rebellion Revolutionary guard unit's special observation platforms in order to clear the way for the main force, sure it was a suicide mission but he ALWAYS took suicide missions. they never lived up to their name.

The cloaked Meka's moved rapidly across the plains due north.....or whatever thing they had instead of north on this planet. His target being around 3 sectors away. however the base had been falsely Identfied as a ER fortress when its true nature is far more sinister and err...purple.

only when they entered visual range did they understand the mistake, strange buildings in a dark purplish color spread around the fortress, their long rotating barrels leaving no doubt to their purpose. John decided to wait and ask for orders instead of charging in headfirst like his old squadmate Lee R. Jenkins who was now a black smudge on konu along with his BAX meka

they thought they were safe............
they thought they were hidden..........
they were wrong............

scanners picking them up had prepared the charging of the cannons and now they fired. beam after beam of energy arked towards John's squad and 10 meka's and their pilots were no more

John was not a man to stand idle and now he will not. Barking orders to his men he charged the building's and opened fire with his special "Death Lance" heavy energy cannon blasting a fairly large hole into the first one while his arm cannon's lacerated the delicate interior circuitry in its barrel
taking one out.

but then they fired again..............
more accurate than before..........
as if they were learning............

his squad now barly 3 in number, John ordered a retreat, His first, and he vowed, his last.





deep within the base new machines started to rumble.
pod's opened............
beast emerged...........
the stars quaked...........
the age of the shak kahr has begun
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 18, 2011 6:58 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

EPIC lol, cool story but shak bases dont have shak units Razz
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 18, 2011 7:05 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

maXDooom wrote:
EPIC lol, cool story but shak bases dont have shak units Razz


they are hidden UNDER the base in some sorta stasis

what? frizz never had a in-universe explanation to why they showed up after the bases were being routinly rampaged through

so i made one yay ^.^

hell, half of the thing was filling over plotholes. jeez i mean really? kombat?
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 18, 2011 9:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like that simple writing style,that story is a bit short tho it would be great if you continue it! Very Happy
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 18, 2011 3:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sagi wrote:
I like that simple writing style,that story is a bit short tho it would be great if you continue it! Very Happy


thks and i will
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 18, 2011 5:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

DO NOT MAKE IT LONG Very Happy

keep it small and enjoyable Very Happy
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 23, 2011 8:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

maXDooom wrote:
DO NOT MAKE IT LONG Very Happy

keep it small and enjoyable Very Happy


heh each chapter is its own story

they barely reference eachother
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 2:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

maXDooom wrote:
DO NOT MAKE IT LONG Very Happy

keep it small and enjoyable Very Happy

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